Room 8 is a stunning dodge with flashy seats and coloured rims.
Room 8 is a shiny tuxedo covered with glitter.
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Hi Zain great job on that metaphor poem of yours.how you described you classroom as a wild out of control of dinosaur which was great for me since i love Dinosaur
Hi Zain, what I did not like was the explanation which you need so people would come and see why you did this and other things.This was really good but I Just didn't really know what you write this Metaphor about.
Bula Zain, It was very exciting reading you poem, I really loved the figurative language you used in this poem. But you do need to explain what you are writing about,great job though keep it up.
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Hi Zain great job on that metaphor poem of yours.how you described you classroom as a wild out of control of dinosaur which was great for me since i love Dinosaur
Hi Zain,
what I did not like was the explanation which you need so people would come and see why you did this and other things.This was really good but I Just didn't really know what you write this Metaphor about.
Bula Zain,
It was very exciting reading you poem, I really loved the figurative language you used in this poem. But you do need to explain what you are writing about,great job though keep it up.
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